Thursday, June 22, 2006

Words (Poetry Thursday)

Aptly adept or adeptly apt
Trips off my tongue now
Sweet short alliteration

My first attempt at haiku. I don't think I have it yet; so be kind.

2 comments:

jim said...

Very playful! I like how the word "alliteration" breaks up the alliteration, too--a kindly spirited inside joke.

Dani said...

I was just thinking yesterday that I have never attempted to write a haiku. I don't know how I missed that assignment! You did a great job -- no reason to apologize.